Composition II - the shape systems
S, C, O, U, L, tunnel, pyramid, V, radiating, diagonal, cross, thirds, golden spiral. Thirteen ready-made skeletons for a frame that is refusing to work.
11 minute read · one activity · lesson 8 of 21
When a frame will not come, you do not need more talent. You need a skeleton. These are the arrangements painters and cinematographers have used for centuries - they are not cheating, they are vocabulary.
The thirteen
- S-curve - subjects form an S. Fluid, graceful; the natural choice for a landscape with a river or a road running through it.
- Circular (O) - elements form an O with the focal point in the centre.
- C-shape - the O, but weighted to one side of the frame.
- U - vertical masses either side, a horizontal between them. Put the focal point in the gap, or leave the gap as a rest for the eye.
- L-shape - a vertical mass on one side, open area on the other, with a horizontal base. The focal point can be the mass, or the emptiness.
- Tunnel - a view through a doorway, a keyhole, a window, a gap in the trees. Instant depth, instant voyeurism.
- Grouped mass - several objects of different shapes and sizes clustered. The still-life arrangement.
- Radiating line - several lines converging on a point. Put the focal point where they meet. A roof, a fence, an avenue of trees.
- Radiating star - radiating lines used for unity, letting the eye travel smoothly around the whole frame.
- Rule of thirds (golden section) - divide into nine equal parts with two horizontal and two vertical lines. Put the subject on a line or an intersection.
- Golden spiral - the classical painters' balance. Harmony, at the cost of being a bit obvious once you see it.
- Double diagonal - elements organised on a diagonal. Emphasises perspective, adds depth, adds dynamism. The action-scene workhorse.
- Pyramid / triangle - figures arranged inside an imaginary triangle. Stability, hierarchy, the group shot.
- V-shape - leads the eye fast to the focal point. Handle sloppily and it traps the viewer instead.
- Cross - a line crossing the composition, dividing both the edges it touches and the whole frame.
- Balanced vs unbalanced - balance is a choice, not a default. An unbalanced composition creates tension: the individual elements start to dominate the whole. Sometimes tension is exactly what the scene needs.
Working from photographs - the honest way
Mirroring a photograph's composition will make your life easier and it is not a sin. Tracing its outlines is a different thing, and it shows: shaping a form from an outline never achieves the weight and volume you expect, and the drawing floats on the page.
The book's method: study the photo first (you see things at minute three that you did not see at second three). Copy it to a separate layer. Grid it - small squares if it is detailed, larger if not. Grid your paper to match, proportionally larger if you are scaling up. Then draw one square at a time.
And: do not be afraid to ADD things to a photograph to make it more interesting.
“Mirroring compositions or photographs is a great practice to help speed up the process. If you find an image striking or similar to something you had imagined, adopt its arrangement for your own purpose.”
- Mitchell James Hughes, Storyboard Art
Five skeletons, one scene
Turn the list into muscle memory by forcing one scene through five different skeletons.
- Scene: a lone figure walking into a building. That is all the direction you get - which is exactly what a real brief feels like.
- Board it five times using five different systems from the list: tunnel, radiating line, double diagonal, L-shape, and rule of thirds.
- Under each frame, write the emotional result in ONE word. (You will find tunnel says 'watched', diagonal says 'urgent', L-shape says 'lonely'. That is the point.)
- Now pick the one you would send to a director if the scene were a thriller. Then pick the one you would send if it were a comedy.
What you should have at the end
Five versions of one shot, each with a different emotional reading, produced deliberately rather than by accident. This is what a director is paying for when they hire you over a camera.
Day 8 in one line
Thirteen skeletons. When a frame is dead, do not render harder - change the skeleton.
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